Friday, 20 May 2016

A Circle Round Object


This Circle Round Object is shiny and like a circle on paper in front of me. I see a rough and hard green stem on top of it. It is squishy when I squeeze it and it rolls when I push it with my index finger, I pick it up and put in my hand. I put it all in my mouth. It is juicy and the skin is soft. My teeth has some skin on them and seeds are sliding down my throat. Then I let it sit on my tongue. The juice tastes like water mixed with chilli but without the burn.

1 comment:

  1. learned how to use adjectives and similes to make more writing more interesting.