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Friday 15 April 2016

St Patrick Day Recount Writing Personal Voice

15/4/16


I had fun on Saint Patrick day because father made us say a promise to our soul friend it was funny because my soul friend was looking at me funny after that we had a share lunch me and my soul friend had a lot of fun that day. My favorite part was the share lunch because me and my soul friend had to share lunch we had fun because we played with our friends and we were eating each others food. We played soccer after that and we ate chips,biscuits and it was delicious.


1 comment:

  1. I learned how to make my writing interesting for my readers by using my personal voice and describing an event from my point of view.

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