100 words challenge

One day I walking back home from school, and the rubbish truck thought I was rubbish because I was filthy and poor, it picked me up and took me to wherever rubbish goes. I was scared and I thought about what my parents would be thinking that i’m not home.

I didn’t know what to do and then I see a big crane picking up rubbish and putting it into fire, I decided to run as fast as I could and tried to catch onto it but I missed and fell on a pile of expired milk. I stood up and I smelt horrible

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100 word challenge

One day my family was hungry and my dad said he was gonna go get fish for us. After 3 hours my dad has not come back so we went looking for him and when we found him he was dead on the ground, my mum and siblings were just standing there. We walked up to my dad and he was still alive she was just tired and went to sleep in the river because it was very hot. After that, we went back home and had a nice fish dinner, it was nice and my brother and sister were hungry for more and my mum and dad said no.

St. Patrick

Today I had to choose one saint and learne about him and post it on my blog